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Senryū



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:iconartofkyle:
Awesome soft poem.! :)
:icondutchshun:
Thank you so much. :)
For taking the time to read & for the great comment.

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:iconwinklepickers:
Did you write this. Who/what is Senryu? :)

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:icondutchshun:
Yes, this is my own poetry. :)

Senryū (川柳, literally 'river willow';) is a Japanese form of short poetry.


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wishing well
coins desire
dreams ripple
:iconwinklepickers:
I understand. It is a good concise poem. :)

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:iconqwaze:
My My My
I'm saddened by the prospect of "sunset at dawn"

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take a deep breath_ make allowances_
It takes all kinds to make a world
:icondutchshun:
No need to feel sad. :)

This poem was inspired by a beautiful autumn morning.
A lovely blue sky, with an amazing cloud formation.
And instead of the sun, there was the pale moon.

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:iconbloodvayne:
like always, you've found a way to say a million things with just a few short words. this poem tells an epic story. well written. :+fav:

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